Interesting design. Your gryffon doesnt look like most others I've seen so far. It's propably because of the main body and the back legs+tail. They remind me of a ferret or a wolverine which gives it an interesting touch. The colors are really well chosen and it's surprising what you can do with so few colors. Good job there. A point of criticism are the feathers and the composition. If I see it right, you used one feather over and over. If one is on the front and one on the back, this doesnt matter, but if you have four times the exact same feather on one side, it starts to look odd. You could really need a little variation there, so that they're not all the same color, form and pattern. The composition looks a little boring to be direct. I think it's because there are no overlapping forms and because you place everything to balance out everything else. How about just one feather on the back ? Not neccessarily in the centre. Or two feathers overlapping ? I just noticed something else what looks a little strange. The form of the gryffon looks like it's saying: Whoops, end of the shirt ! If you get what I mean. I still think it's really nice, but it can definetely be improved. I hope this helps.
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pretty cool! My only advice would be to take out the line design on the back. It just doesn't seem to fit well with the awesome griffin you made! Check out my entry and let me know what you think! [link]
Great job with the griffin! I really like the colors you chose and the design of the feathers
I have some critiques, but these are just my opinions of course It looks like a lot, but I'm just explaining what I mean, so please don't hate me :3
I completely agree with ReedM about the line part - it really doesn't fit in at all with the style of your graphic and to me it's really distracting from your great griffin.
I also think the feather in the front right corner really competes with the griffin, since it's about the same size - I'd suggest making it like 1/2 or a 1/3 of the current height. Same thing with the large feather on the back (and maybe flip the back horizontally? If you think about it the two big feathers would be on the same side of the shirt, since the back is actually flipped from how we're looking at it now.. unless that's what you wanted, in which case never mind ). I'd also make the third feather on the back a smidge bigger, so you have graduating sizes (x-small, small, medium, medium-large).
Last two things, and I'm being really nitpicky here 'cause of my OCD lol, but anyway.. the feathers on the back don't alternate perfectly (the top one could just be flipped horizontally to fix it). Don't know if I explained that too clearly =/ I also just noticed the quill of the feather in the front doesn't overlap the griffin? Like the white of the quill doesn't overlap with the brown on the griffin. Again, super small detail but it does make the depth perception a little wonky.
thank you! if I think definitely eliminate the tribal xd the feathers looks so because is copy and paste u///u but then I can repaint and then will reduce the size of the two feathers but not understanding what you mean by large pen behind and also didn't understand what the overlap sorry english is not my language